Friday, September 21, 2007

ok here is part two! Yay! also after this i'm getting a beta-reader!

"... . Louisa liked Buso Renkin, but still thpught that Fruits basket was better, as did Lauren. So as they were arguing in the shade of the tree by the gym, looking somewhat suspicious, Mr. Colsen (the security gaurd) just noticed the hippy, the goth, the guy, and Grace. The grou[p was in the shadows so Coulsen couldn't accuratly make out what they're doing so he assumed they were selling something. Immeditly he shouted 'What are you kids selling!'. This made Luisa scream, Luaren and Jake jump, and made Grace blink. When they turned to face Coulsen, he saw that they were not selling anything and appolagized and walked away. after he was gone Luisa looked back at the others and said 'Geez what was that about?'. Jake, being part of the Caine Crew News, here's alot of gossip and rumors so he knew what was the reason behind that. 'Recently 4 students were busted with being in the possetion of drugs. I beleive 3 of them went to Jubi. because they sold some. the were _____, _______, ________, and ______.' Jake explained. 'Yet another sign of society's degeneration...' Grace said gloomily. 'yeah' agreed Lauren. Jake and Louisa noticed that Lauren was acting closely to Grace recently, like she was now, standing right next to Grace."

that's it. sorry it's so lond i got carried away :). i hope you liked it. by the way the drug story is a true one, both the cou,sen and student one.

2 comments:

gg said...

Nice. It's not too long. It could have been much longer. Don't worry about length.

Jake said...

it's not done yet and i was tried. sorry.