Friday, August 31, 2007

ok this is a preview of the story i'm working on.

it involes a romantic relationship between grace and lauren tolbert.

" it was any ordinary day at A.G., durring F(resh)A(ir)T(ime). Grace, Luisa, Jake (me) and Lauren were hanging out. They were haveing a very heated debate about which manga was better, fruits basket or Buso Renkin. Grace, who read it but was not really into it, and Jake, who did not read it or any other Sholo for that matter, thought that Buso Renkin was better..."

sorry i have to leave it there but i will keep posting more if you want!

9 comments:

Grace said...

You need a beta-reader, man. Or something. :P

...you're allowed to comment, peoples!

Jake said...

beta-reader? what's that? is it sometype of spell checker?

Grace said...

An editor (a person, not a system), but it's usually a term used in fanfiction. I thought you would recognize it. Hm. :P

gg said...

We are his beta readers.

Grace said...

...

*facepalm*

Hey, Jake, can I edit your story?

gg said...

Does this count as slash fiction?

Grace said...

...Yes. Cower in fear!

Jake said...

okay yes grace you can edit my story (but onl for gramar problems and spelling). i'll email you the next one before i post it

Clare said...

Oh...oh dear.

Oddly enough, this makes me feel old. I mean, when your little sister's friends are writing slash fiction... Heck, when your little sister is writing slash fiction! (And don't try to say you don't, Grace!)